i just read " i love you but i cant trust you" by my classmate Cecilia.I think its a really realistic story because she uses a lot of quotes and the conversation she is telling us makes us feel that we really are there.
i also read " life" by my classmate Billy.I think that he used a skill that is very hard to do and it is to make you feel that you are seeing all this pictures like you are visualizing the story.
I read the story calvin wrote and i thinki that it is a funny story. he uses a bit too much imagination.
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