.My Opinion.

i just read " i love you but i cant trust you" by my classmate Cecilia.I think its a really realistic story because she uses a lot of quotes and the conversation she is telling us makes us feel that we really are there.
i also read " life" by my classmate Billy.I think that he used a skill that is very hard to do and it is to make you feel that you are seeing all this pictures like you are visualizing the story.
I read the story calvin wrote and i thinki that it is a funny story. he uses a bit too much imagination.

ReSpeCt ...?

"Rap music as a whole is disrespectful toward women", and i agree with this because in many Rap music,women are refer as "hoes" or "bitches" and seem to just be for sexual pleasure. This is very disrespectful because they start believing something and soon women are just an icon.And in the music videos women choose to be in them and it just makes things worse because then it kinda says like they agree with being called a bitch or a hoe. And so it just them accepting the image they are being given.

This made me think about how our society is accepting an image that doesnt reflect on how we really are.The fact that we enjoy watvhing shows with violence ,playing games wioth violence and even watching music videos that show violence is us accepting that fact that we thinks its ok and we support it.Its so important to be hard to get respect from others eventhough i think that because your killing people and stuff you should get respect is not neccesary. Why get respect for being like that?? i give respect for being real and honest and not trying to be someone your not. THATS NOT BEING A REAL MAN.THATS BEING FAKE!!!

I better Find Your Lovin’

“I love you babe!” Calvin told Cecilia. As he said it he had a creepy little smile.
“I loves you too!” Cecilia Shouted
Fabiola, Cecilia’ best friend was next to her
“Aww you ctoes are soooooo cute” she said.

Calvin and Cecilia had been talking for awhile before they actually decided to make it serious. To her it was kind of a though situation in getting into a relationship with Calvin because he had a really bad reputation…he was known for being a player. Everyone knew him for that. Therefore for Cecilia she was confused because after all she was risking her self into getting hurt because he could play her at any time. But over all that she still took the chance and went for it. Then everybody came up to her and told her all the things that he has done in the past. But she didn’t care because she knew what she wanted.

Fabiola and Cecilia went to confirmation class together. The same day that Cecilia and Calvin got together Cecilia and Fabiola had confirmation. They were in church and Cecilia turned to Fabiola and said
“Aye guess what?”
“What?” said Fabiola?
“I go out with Calvin!!!”
Fabiola just looked at her and smiled and said that’s cool. Cecilia wondered why her best friend was not happy for her.

The next day at school it was kind of a weird day…

Some time passed and Cecilia started hearing many rumors about how supposedly Fabiola and Calvin had something going on…
Cecilia was not so convinced about that especially because she never would have thought that her best friend was actually going to be doing something like that to her.

Once again they had to go to confirmation class and things were a little tense because Cecilia and Fabiola had not been talking because of those rumors. Cecilia finally decided to confront Fabiola about the situation and she just wanted to know what was going on. And whether or not the rumors were real or not.
“Hi Faby”
“Hi Ceci…”
“What wrong? Is there something you need to tell me?
“No, not really why..?”
“Hmm I do not really know what is gong on but I need you to tell me because I cannot just keep ignoring it”
“Well look I know there has been a lot of rumors going around but look you’re my friend I would NEVER do something like that to you”
“Are you sure?”
“Yes im sure, look ima promise you that it is our friendship before any man”
“Ok im trusting you but please let me know if anything happens”

The next day at school rumors kept going and going another friend of Cecilia, Jenny came and said
“Hey you know you’re my friend and I look out for you…and I just know that there is definitely something going on between both of them”
“Why do you say that?”
“Because I seen them like talking but it wasn’t like normally talking”
At that moment Cecilia felt angry, disappointed, betrayed, hurt. So many feelings all at once. She could not believe that her “Best friend” had done such a thing to her. The next day Cecilia and Fabiola decided to talk about it, because it seemed to be the right thing to do.

They talked and talked things just seemed to get worse along the way.
Definitely a friendship had been broken and all because one guy had came in between them. How things could have been different if he never came in the way?
Of course Cecilia never just blamed Fabiola she blamed Calvin too. The drama continued…
Time has passed and “things” have happened…
It seemed that as much as Cecilia tries to avoid them she just can’t seem to actually avoid them. She moved on at some point she didn’t care about them no more and Calvin just always came back and some how got Cecilia to fall for him again.
Cecilia started to build a huge amount of hate toward him because everything bad that happened to her some how was related to Calvin…

Approximately 6 months have passed Calvin and Fabiola have been going out for those 6 months. Fabiola went on a trip for the summer and Cecilia and Calvin have been talking again…
The future is still to come… what’s going too happened? Who knows…?

Cecilia knows that when school comes back and Fabiola is back there will be A Lot of drama…

He says that he wants Cecilia back but Cecilia just can not trust him no more. He keeps trying to keep her there. But Cecilia just is not going to be there waiting for him to make the choice whether he is going to take her back or not. So for now, since he is not making the choice...

Then she will make it for him… and most likely he will not like it.

"One Holy Night"

A time when i had to believe someone eventhough i knew that they were lying was when i was a little girl and thought that evwerybody told the truth.I had my first boyfriend in the 6th grade and i thought he was the most cutiest and handsomest boy at our whole school.We would always hold hands and walk togeather at lunch.He would walk me to the conner and wait with me untill my mama would come pick me up everyday.When i wasnt with him he would be running through my mind like a movie on repeat.When i got to school everyday and see him i would always have this big grin on my face and start to blush. When we kissed i would feel like im on top of the clouds looking down on the world. i would feel ligther then air.But when i thought everything could be more perfect i came to school early to come surpise him on out three month anniversary i could find him nowhere around the school. I just thought that he hasnt came to school yet. so i went to the store to go get a kookie and share with him at lunch. but on my way to the store in a alley i seen him with another girl making out and hugging.it broke my heart it felt like the world had stopped and nobody cared for me no more. i had dropped the the gift i had gotten him along with my heart.